April 16: he's not in the clouds the ketchup on my bun or the smashed...
I hope no one is offended by this poem, but it's my take on this phenomenon. I will comment on many poems later tonight. Sorry, I'm so behind. To tell you the truth, it's been hard this year getting...
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I always laugh when I see the reports on TV of an image of Jesus in the bumper of a car or in tree bark. I think you are right on. While some of the imagery is gross and the details are something I...
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This is so funny! I love the voice in this. A great jibe at those who find Jesus in their chicken nuggets and the save them to sell on ebay. You won't find this on eBay I don't think!
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So glad for your trust in us. . We would never judge your for this. It's NaPo. Let fly! Although I admit to being less engaged than other years. Shit and everything. Doing my best.
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I really like "he ain't white" too. And agree with Kendall on omitting the word, poop. Not needed. I'm not offended, but the poem might be even more effective if more subtle, tongue-in-cheek. And re...
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Yes, Billy, the "he ain't white" is great, a long-held belief of mine.
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thanks everyone i've gotten mixed reviews mostly negative kendall's comments are the best i've received and he mentioned some things i thought were good and he got what i was going for. i don't know...
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not really my croissant, Billy, , but I'm not offended, and like Greta, i too feel, yes, "He ain't white" re: Jesus on toast... I have an exclamation mark (photo'd it) in a cast iron frying pan. That...
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Removed by Piphany. Sorry to Billy if this was too personal.
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Sorry, Mignon, but I didn't say I was busy and overwhelmed; I said I wasn't as amped up this year as in previous years. And I didn't write this poem in a crappy mood. And I'm already working on...
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How did this poem get bumped up? I haven't edited it or looked at since my last post at the bottom.
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Oh, I see, it's not me sending emails to Toni. I'm not offended. I posted to you Mignon, just to clear up what you had perceived. I haven't complained to anyone.
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No worries, Billy! No, no, I haven't heard from Billy. And I didn't mean to point any fingers. Just meant a gentle reminder. All's well, I think.
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